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Writing Lyrics in English ) My 1st song

romanstyxmusic

Russian Federation

Hi I’m writing a new song in English ) Are there any mistakes or unusual sounding phrases? Do I need to make any corrections? Here it is:

A New day has come

But nothing really happens

She’s walking out

Talking in her mind

She’s looking good

She’s using secret weapons

Got everything,

But doesn’t feel alright

Chorus

Cause the only thing in life

Which keeps her motivated

Cause the only thing in life

Is Love

And the only thing in life

Which makes her so frustrated

It’s the only thing she can’t get

Enough

Her instagram is

Full of inspiration

And every pic

Gets a tons of hearts

Where do they go?

Which memory location?

This loneliness is

One of the modern arts

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Teacher Amy

United States

Sounds good! The only unusual-sounding phrase is “Which memory location?” :-)

Best,

Amy

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